Purpose: Is to inform those people unaware of
the situation and the dire need to let boys and girls receive an education
without the fear of being attack like Malala was.
Audience:
everyone at the UN, the world globally, the people who must raise there voice
and fight for education, and the people who can help them in their need of
education.
Context: Malala
Yousafzai a 16 year old girl spoke at the UN after being shot in the head by a
Taliban member. Malala is a believer of free, compulsory education for every
child. This was due to the fear of receiving an education in Pakistan due to
the Taliban.
Section1: Intro/acknowledgements
Purpose: To address and Thank all of those who
have helped her this far and in doing that it helps her ethos.
Appeals: Ethos
Section 2:
The real beginning of her speech
Purpose: to turn the subject to what she thinks
is important also to set the tone.
Appeals: pathos
Technique: uses a sense of unity=”Dear brothers
and Sisters”. Uses poetry and repetition to focus on the main issue= “so here I
stand-“.
Effectiveness: its very effective she
automatically makes you feel like a brother or sister just because you are listening
or reading the speech. And the repetition really makes those points about
peace, equality, and education really stand out.
Section 3:
Background as to why she is continuing to fight
Purpose: To inform those why she continues to
fight even after her ordeals and
encourages other to fight along side her.
Appeals: pathos, sympathy and builds up her
ethos
Technique: she continues to use repetition to
address the audience as her brother, sisters, or even friends = “Dear ~~”
almost like a letter to a friend. She belittles the fact of she got shot and
follows it with the fact she is not the only one and that through the death of
fear becomes strength and power =illusions. Also there are
illisions/refrerences to important people such as Martin Luther King and Nelson
Mandela.
Section 4:
The Call to Arms
Purpose: To reach out and unite everyone
similar to her to fight and let their voices out to speak up
Appeals: Pathos and Logos
Technique: illusions = “ we realized the importance
of pens and books when we saw the guns”. References to sayings “the pen is mightier
than the sword”. Giving the audience a reason why this is happening and what
they can do to fight back = Taliban is afraid of books because they cant read
them so we pose a threat to them so by using education as our weapon we can
defeat them. Calling on past memories = “there was a boy in our school-“.
Effectiveness: it makes those who can relate
take up this call to arms and want to fight back with education.
Section 5:
Purpose: to sum up the finally and truly start
a revolution
Appeals: Pathos
Technique: a lot of repetition = “we call~”.
She tries to unite everyone with using “We”. Builds motivation using lines like=
“No one can stop us” “We will bring change” “One Child, one teacher , one pen
and one book can change the world. One thing can change everything.
Effectiveness: it varies depending on who you
are students such as many American students may not agree with her final
sentence “Education First.” But there are many people out there who would agree
with her point of view and her solution.
General
Evaluation:
Malala is still a young writer with
more to go but she has a good tone and uses many illusions to gain her point. I
have much respect for her maybe it is because of the pathos she has built in
her speech. Unfortunately she has not persuaded me to fight her cause so the
effectiveness of the piece on an audience member such as me did not work in all
aspects. She primarily uses pathos and that does not reach to all members of
the audience. She does not have much logos to her speech but she attempts to
captivate her audience and to motivate them for her cause. To make this speech
reach more members of the audience more logos is needed.
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